Update to the Assamite Genre Document: 5.2

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Proposal Type: Genre Packet
Opened: 24-Jun-2011 1:00AM EDT
Closing: 24-Jun-2011 1:00AM EDT


Pursuant to Coordinator Bylaw 3.C.iii, I propose the attached Updated Assamite Genre Document for use in One World by Night.

Grandfathering will be handled on a case by case basis. All appropriate documentation and notifications as outlined in this packet should be sent to assamitecoordsubcoords@googlegroups.com within thirty (30) days of this document passing.

The packet can be found here: https://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0ASibYhEs0CIqZDR2bWZ0el8xNjBmZ3hwajhnO...

1. Change the layout to something more cohesive: Moving all the Laws of Haqim info for different factions together.
2. Update the Khabar
3. Update Converts
4. Update Clan Friendship
5. Remove overly WW material (we are well within the WW word count limit.)
6. Merit and Flaws removed/noted where to find, new OWbN created ones added
7. Un-Aging reworded
8. Laws of Haqim vs. the Traditions, where's the line?
9. Added the Vizier section (Artifacts removed, added a suggested cost for WoLK)
10. Remove unconquered stuff reference other packet
11. Added combos and list where they can be found (removed the A&T combos)
12. Added the Darkening scale (corrected a typo)
13. Corrected the bad grammar of the learning lore level to make more sense
14. Added the R&U items that are already passed though council and were not noted here.
15. Added/Updated Lores Section included AT lore
16. Dispossessed section updated with help of the Anarch Coord
17. Update table of contents.

With the feedback from a few other people, I've done the following:

Word in "the Darkening" Information corrected, as a note, this is something that DOES happen to assamite's all of them, we've added the scale to allow for players to actually use it in game as they should be already able to do so per the book.

The current wording for the combo mentioned in one of the objections, is already word for word what it is in the Anarch packet, as it's already in OWbN as worded, I'm just adding it to my packet as I stated previously to the Anarch coordinator I would. I have removed the Archon's and Templar's combos.

Regarding the WW wording has already been addressed, and we are well within the limits we're allowed to have, and considering the current packet is pretty much 90% copied strait from the book (something I didn't know till trying to do this major over haul, and pretty scary to look at) I'm pretty happy with how things have been thinned.

Kept WoIK in with the following wording included: We also suggest to STs to put a cost to this similar to Mentor, 1 point per level/rank. This way those that felt it should have a cost, will allow for one, and those that felt it shouldn't wouldn't. I feel that's an appropriate win/win compromise for everyone involved.

Maybe 3rd times a charm.

Thanks!

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